i can not see it

Dear razpna
I see it, Please try again

HEY I CANT SEE NEITHER... I REFRESHED MY BROWSER TOO... BUT STILL CANT SEE IT

Image won't load...
Tryna host it on photobucket.com

Sorry to beat a dead horse, but to be a bit more specific, it seems the problem is that you've linked to a webpage rather than an image file.
As for the image itself, the lighting on the figure is quite cool and achieves the energized look very well. The anatomy, sense of mass, and folds are all very good (perhaps you could differentiate the finger joints a little more, but that's not a must). On the other hand, I find the background kind of busy and flat. I would probably do away with the texture overlays (esp. the one creating diagonal streaks) and refine the side structures to make them more solid and metallic. You really nailed your stated objectives, though.

Won't load for me either.

Wont load!!

The artwork is here, lads: http://features-temp.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/136116/136116_1187961490_large.jpg

Ok, when linking your art, you should like the image itself, and not the page on which it is located, ok?

The main character is great, it's so very well done! His expression is awesome and ouch! That might hurt! The foreground, though, seems kinda weird for me. I'll explain: it's as focused as the character, who is behind it. For us, observers, the foreground should be somehow out of focus, with softer lines and colors. The same happens to the background, which you managed to paint pretty well! +6/7

I agree with chillie, the main character is just awesome. It really looks like he's twisting in pain while losing strength in his legs, the pose is simply lovely!

however as chillie already stated the foregrounds pillars are somewhat grabbing my focus, I guess its due to the sharp lines which should be a bit blurred in my opinion, or as chille stated - out of focus .

i don´t see. Try upload in www.imageshack.us

Dear Friends
I'm sorry about link error, Now I fix it, so you can see the image right now.
also, Special thanks to all of chillie & Daykan for their advice that helped me.

Nice idea and colors!....good expression!
Carlos